Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in middle school, I made an internet page for girl group singers.
I learned HTML commands by myself with a book. I also learned a photoshop program. I edited their picture and put it on my page.
I hoped to be a programmer at that time.
It was not usual to make an internet page. And I heard praise from another per[이름] on the internet.
I want to take it up again sometimes
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Mr. [이름]. Thank you for your response to the homework. I could have never imagined you would go that far as a fan.^^ I have to admit I was quite surprised. Now I have to know more. kkkk~ I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I\'ll see you in our next class. ~Jane c\",)
When I was in middle school, I made an internet page for girl group singers.
>> CORRECT =)
I learned HTML commands by myself with a book.
OR>> I learned HTML commands from a book by myself.
I also learned a photoshop program.
>> CORRECT =)
OR>> I also learned how to use a photoshop program.
I edited their picture and put it on my page.
>> CORRECT =)
I hoped to be a programmer at that time.
>> CORRECT =)
It was not usual to make an internet page.
>> CORRECT =)
And I heard praise from another per[이름] on the internet.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> And I heard compliments from another per[이름] on the internet.
I want to take it up again sometimes
>> I want to take it up again sometime.
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