Homework
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Share the bad or worst travel experience you had.
>>> When I was 21, I trip Tokyo with my friends. Since I went there on July, it was so hot and humid. I sweat a lot, and it was the bad experience for me.
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When I was 21, I trip Tokyo with my friends.
>>> When I was 21, I went on a trip to Tokyo with my friends.
Since I went there on July, it was so hot and humid.
>>> Since I went there in July, it was so hot and humid.
I sweat a lot, and it was the bad experience for me.
>>> I sweat a lot, and it was a bad experience for me.
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