Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s hard to tell, but first I\'ll ask why they lost their job.
And I\'ll give them advice so that it doesn\'t happen again.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for remembering to write your homework^^
It takes a very good strategy how to sympathize with a person who lost their job or a family member. The best thing is they knew someone who understands their feelings. Keep up!
Aki~
It\'s hard to tell, but first I\'ll ask why they lost their job.
>>> CORRECT!
And I\'ll give them advice so that it doesn\'t happen again.
>>> CORRECT!
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