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학생이 쓴 원문
We can make food atractive by makingit
Big and colorful .
or have a picture or attractive things.
somebody will like sweet or sour things .
a plain orenge juce with a atractive cup or bread.
or with a little toy on top.
thank you
강사 첨삭
You have such creative ideas, Yu Ri! I think even adults would love them too! See you later!-Faith-
We can make food atractive by makingit Big and colorful or have a picture or attractive things.>> We can make food attractive by making it big and colorful or by showing attractive pictures or things.
somebody will like sweet or sour things .
>> Some like sweet or sour food.
a plain orenge juce with a atractive cup or bread. or with a little toy on top.
a plain orenge juce with a atractive cup or bread. or with a little toy on top.
>> Others like a plain orange juice with an attractive cup, bread or with a little toy on top.
thank you
thank you
>> Thank you!
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