Homework📝
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I guess we have to do lots of practice or train to be fearless.
and the mind that you want to be fearless.
I think we could never be fearless without wanting it.
so the first thing to do is wish to be fearless.
and then make a plan.
we could exercise to
thanks^^💜
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
Finally, I can check your homework! ^ ^ Wow, your sentences are amazing!
-Rachel
I guess we have to do lots of practice or train to be fearless.
>> correct
and the mind that you want to be fearless.
and the mind that you want to be fearless.
>> We should also have the mind to be fearless.
I think we could never be fearless without wanting it.
I think we could never be fearless without wanting it.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
so the first thing to do is to wish to be fearless.
so the first thing to do is to wish to be fearless.
>> correct
and then make a plan.
and then make a plan.
>> correct
we could exercise to.
we could exercise to.
>> We could exercise too.
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