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I can try to make her happy.
I can make coffee for her or hug my mom
and I like my mom so I don\\\'t want her to fell sad or tired.
some times I could make her happy by making her lagh
^^
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Hello Ruby,
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-Rachel
I can try to make her happy.
>> correct
I can make coffee for her or hug my mom
>> correct
and I like my mom so I don\\\'t want her to fell sad or tired.
and I like my mom so I don\\\'t want her to fell sad or tired.
>> I like my mom, so I don\'t want her to feel sad or tired.
some times I could make her happy by making her lagh
some times I could make her happy by making her lagh
>> Sometimes, I could make her happy by making making her laugh.
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