Homework📝
학생이 쓴 원문
the advantages of extream sports are 🪂
1.it could make your life more exiting and fun
2.it can make a big adventure
3.it could be good for your body when it comes to exersise
강사 첨삭
Nice job, Yu Ri! Your answers are all correct. Just don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of a sentence and put a period at the end of it. -Faith-
the advantages of extream sports are 🪂>> The advantages of extreme sports are:
1.it could make your life more exiting and fun
1.it could make your life more exiting and fun
>> 1. It could make your life more exciting and fun.
2.it can make a big adventure
2.it can make a big adventure
>> 2. It can make a big adventure.
3.it could be good for your body when it comes to exersise
3.it could be good for your body when it comes to exersise
>> 3. It could be good for your body when it comes to exercise.
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