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학생이 쓴 원문
My most memorable project was about science.
It was plants and I learnd about futere earth and the plants.
It was really intresting and both fun.
I whant to do it again in the future.
I leard very much about plants and I like plants more!.
thank you~
강사 첨삭
Wow! It must be really fantastic, Yu Ri! Your love for plants must make you more concerned about nature!-Faith-
My most memorable project was about science.>> CORRECT
It was plants and I learnd about futere earth and the plants.
It was plants and I learnd about futere earth and the plants.
>> It was about plants and I learned about the future earth and the plants.
It was really intresting and both fun.
It was really intresting and both fun.
>> It was both interesting and fun.
I whant to do it again in the future.
I whant to do it again in the future.
>> I want to do it again in the future.
I leard very much about plants and I like plants more!.
I leard very much about plants and I like plants more!.
>> As I\'ve learned very much about plants, I like them more!
thank you~
thank you~
>> Thank you~
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