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1) He has listened to the song. 2) She is reading a comic. 3) It has rained a little. 4) She has been here. 5) He has written an e-mail.
My Daemado trip is on April 10.
That day is a weekday but I need not go to work.Because that day is an Easter vacation.
I will have an Easter vacation for 5 days from Holy Saturday to next Wendsday.
My original trip was April 9 and I changed my schedule.Because original trip would be stayed Damado only for 2 hours.
It's too short to enjoy.
The Ferry to Daemado on April 10 leaves Busan at 9AM.It takes for an hour.
Return to Busan departure at 2PM.
We will be able to stay for 4 hours.
People call Daemado trip to dutyfree shopping.
Whatever 2 hours or 4 hours, people just visit there for a shopping.
Dutyfree is able to use on the internet easily.
Before people take a ferry, they are able to recieve things that they bought on the internet dutyfree.
They have a inconvenience to carry them all day but they are satisfied with a cheap shopping.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Miss. [Name], thank you for sending your composition today..
I\'m really happy that you will be staying in daemado for a longer period of time!yey!:D
Anyway, we will be talking about this later my dear okay?
Can\'t wait to talk to you again..:)
Teacher Cam^^
1) He has listened to the song.
>>correct
2) She is reading a comic.
>>correct
3) It has rained a little.
>>correct
4) She has been here.
>>correct
5) He has written an e-mail.
>>correctMy Daemado trip is on April 10. >>correct
That day is a weekday but I need not go to work.
>>correct
Because that day is an Easter vacation.>>correct
I will have an Easter vacation for 5 days from Holy Saturday to next Wendsday.
>>I will have an Easter vacation for 5 days from Holy Saturday to next Wednesday.My original trip was April 9 and I changed my schedule.
>>correct
Because original trip would be stayed Damado only for 2 hours.
>>Because my original trip was for us to stay in Daemado only for 2 hours.It\'s too short to enjoy.
>>correctThe Ferry to Daemado on April 10 leaves Busan at 9AM.
>>correct
It takes for an hour.
>>It will take pne hour.Return to Busan departure at 2PM.
>>Our return to Busan departs at 2pm.We will be able to stay for 4 hours.
>>correctPeople call Daemado trip to dutyfree shopping.
>>correctWhatever 2 hours or 4 hours, people just visit there for a shopping.
>>correctDutyfree is able to use on the internet easily.
>>We can also use the internet easily in Dutyfree.Before people take a ferry, they are able to recieve things that they bought on the internet dutyfree.>>Before the people will take the ferry, they will be able to receive things that they bought on the internet dutyfree shop.
They have a inconvenience to carry them all day but they are satisfied with a cheap shopping.
>>They usually have inconvenience to carry them all day but they are very much satisfied with the cheap shopping.
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