homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What would make you the happiest?
I do like watching the England football games with my friends drinking alcohol. It makes me happy.
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What would make you the happiest?
>> Correct!
I do like watching the England football games with my friends drinking alcohol.
>> Correct!
OR: I enjoy watching England football games with friends while drinking alcohol.
OR: I enjoy watching England football games with friends while drinking alcohol.
It makes me happy.
>> Correct!
OR: It brings me joy.
OR: It brings me joy.
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