Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more?
>>> Yes, because public transport can relieve the traffic jam. It can also protect environment pollution.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Steve!
Being part of a good environmental change matters. If everyone will have the same mindset of having the responsibility to maintain nature, then we should not be suffering from global warming now. But we are humans. We want more.
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T. Aki~
Yes, because public transport can relieve the traffic jam. It can also protect environment pollution.
>>> Yes, because public transport can relieve the traffic jam. It can also protect against environmental pollution.
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