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2023-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I will like the suggestion because I think we need some exercise for our health. Actually they are playing golf and recommended me before. I have to start learning golf now.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [이름]. I heard golf is one of the trending sports these days and it is usually the sport popularly played among colleagues :) Let\'s talk about it when you have decided to start playing it. I think it would be an interesting conversation. Good luck! Have a good night. See you tomorrow in class. ~Teacher Jane ^_^


I will like the suggestion because I think we need some exercise for our health. 
>> CORRECT =)

Actually they are playing golf and recommended me before. 
>> Actually, they are playing golf and recommended it to me before. 

I have to start learning golf now. 
>> CORRECT =) 

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