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학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you. I happy, because teacher come back. Here are my answers : Everyone want to become beautiful. I think that plastic surgeries gain confidence. because face get better. But plastic surgeries often shouldn't do. If plastic surgeries often do, she/he is become surgiholic.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I am happy that you are really trying your best to express yourself though you must continue practicing words that are indicated above. Do not worry, we will do everything to help you be more articulate in your word endings.
T. Lorraine
Thank you. I happy, because teacher come back.
>> Thank you. I am happy because my teacher came back.
Here are my answers :
>> Here are my answers.
>> Here are my answers to the question.
>> Here is my answer to the question.
Everyone want to become beautiful.
>> Everyone wants to become beautiful.
I think that plastic surgeries gain confidence. because face get better.
>> I think plastic surgeries gain confidence and the face gets better.
But plastic surgeries often shouldn\'t do.
>> But we should not often undergo plastic surgeries.
If plastic surgeries often do, she/he is become surgiholic.
>> If someone often undergo plastic surgeries, she/he becomes surgiholic.
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