Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
I will like to write a make believe story.
me and my little sister is writing(the screming bug story).
and it is also a fake real story.
and i like the part when we finish the book^^.
thank you!😁😁😄
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
I think writing about a screaming bug which does some Ninja move would be very funny. ^ ^ I would like to read the book you will write someday.
-Rachel
I will like to write a make believe story.
>> I would like to write a make-believe story.
me and my little sister is writing(the screming bug story).
me and my little sister is writing(the screming bug story).
>> My little sister and I would be writing a story about a screaming bug.
and it is also a fake real story.
and it is also a fake real story.
>> It is also a fake story but looks like a real one.
and i like the part when we finish the book^^.
and i like the part when we finish the book^^.
>> correct
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