Homework😀
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I would like to have a pritty white house near the beach.
and I will like a big clean glass window and a little garden to with a wodden table
and some flowers willbe growing on the gardon and sometimes iwillswim in the 🌼💐🌞🌝
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
It would be nice to have a pretty house by the beach with a mini-garden in it. ^ ^
-Rachel
I would like to have a pritty white house near the beach.
>> I would like to have a pretty white house near the beach.
and I will like a big clean glass window and a little garden to with a wodden table
and I will like a big clean glass window and a little garden to with a wodden table
>> The house will have clean big windows and there will be a wooden table in the mini-garden.
and some flowers willbe growing on the gardon and sometimes iwillswim in the 🌼💐🌞🌝
and some flowers willbe growing on the gardon and sometimes iwillswim in the 🌼💐🌞🌝
>> I will grow some flowers in my mini-garden and go to the beach for a swim in my free time.
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