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2021-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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yes I will save my sister or mother and If I can\'t I will call for help . I can save my familly becase I love them . and I know they will save them If I need help. I know all family\'s are very speshal and i will save them if my family needs help

강사 첨삭

Ruby, 
I think family will always be family, so no matter what happens we will always love them and stick with them. Thank you for sharing your idea about this topic. ^ ^
-Rachel
yes I will save my sister or mother and If I can\'t I will call for help.
>> correct
I can save my familly becase I love them.
>> I can save my family because I love them.
and I know they will save them If I need help.
>> And I know they will save me if I need help.
I know all family\'s are very speshal and i will save them if my family needs help
>> I know all families are very special, and I will save them if my family needs help.

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