Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to have my own age friends because they understand me and can play with me more easly and fun.
and I also would like to be friends with older peoples to,
like my family or teacher they help me learn new things , they help me understand unknown words from my head.
so I think I like older and also young people.
and ofcorse I like my friends to 🧡
thank you💚
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
I guess having older or younger friends doesn\'t matter. What matters is that you are having fun and can communicate with each other well.^ ^ So, I am your friend, right? ^ ^
-Rachel
I like to have my own age friends because they understand me and can play with me more easily and fun.
>> correct
>> OR: I prefer to have my own age friends because they understand me, can play with me more easily and we can have more fun.
And I also would like to be friends with older peoples too.
And I also would like to be friends with older peoples too.
>> correct
Like my family or teacher they help me learn new things , they help me understand unknown words from my head.
Like my family or teacher they help me learn new things , they help me understand unknown words from my head.
>> correct
>> OR: Like my family or teacher, they help me learn new things and help me understand unfamiliar words.
so I think I like older and also young people.
so I think I like older and also young people.
>> So, I think I prefer both.
and ofcorse I like my friends to 🧡
>> And of course, I like my same-age friends too.
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