Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know what princess should I be.
but I like all of them and the picturs are really good .
so I will create my own princess and be like her.
It could possibilly be really fun
thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
Oh, that would be great-creating your own princess character! Create someone who is smart, nice, and can play the violin well. ^ ^
-Rachel
I don\'t know what princess should I be.
>> correct
but I like all of them and the picturs are really good .
but I like all of them and the picturs are really good .
>> But I like all of them the the pictures/photos are really good.
so I will create my own princess and be like her.
so I will create my own princess and be like her.
>> correct
It could possibilly be really fun
It could possibilly be really fun
>> It could possibly be really fun.
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