Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
It is Jimjilbang visitors in the different nation often visit Jimjilbang.
They eat, relax and talk together in Jimjilbang .
In the Jimjilbang the Korean people sell food.
I want to go there to^^
-thank you and have a nice day~-
강사 첨삭
I hope you can go there someday, Yu Ri! You must have fun with your family and friends.-Faith-
It is Jimjilbang>> It is Jimjilbang.
visitors in the different nation often visit Jimjilbang.
>> Visitors from different nations often visit Jimjilbang.
They eat, relax and talk together in Jimjilbang .
They eat, relax and talk together in Jimjilbang .
>> CORRECT
OR They enjoy in Jimjilbang by eating, relaxing and talking together .
In the Jimjilbang the Korean people sell food.
>> In Jimjilbang, the Korean people sell food.
I want to go there to^^
I want to go there to^^
>> I want to go there too^^
-thank you and have a nice day~-
>> Thank you and have a nice day!~
-thank you and have a nice day~-
>> Thank you and have a nice day!~
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