Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
to reduce air pollution, we need todo
1.not riding cars in a short way
2. to use electricity insted of gas
iIt is good to use bio energy too you could not trough away dirty rubbish.
And try to protect birds from getting caught.
thankyou
강사 첨삭
Wow, Yu Ri! You have very nice answers! If everyone does them, we can save our Mother Nature.-Faith-
to reduce air pollution, we need todo>> To reduce air pollution, we need to do the following:
1.not riding cars in a short way
1.not riding cars in a short way
>> 1. Do not ride cars when you go to a place that is within walking distance.
2. to use electricity insted of gas
2. to use electricity insted of gas
>> 2. Use electricity instead of gas.
iIt is good to use bio energy too you could not trough away dirty rubbish.
iIt is good to use bio energy too you could not trough away dirty rubbish.
>> 3. It is good to use bioenergy too because you don\'t need to throw away dirty rubbish.
And try to protect birds from getting caught.
And try to protect birds from getting caught.
>> 4. And try to protect birds from getting caught.
thankyou
>> Thank you.
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