Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
two times the first one is to look at my hair and arainge it 1 time before going school .
then arrainge my hair one time before I go to bed.
I think arrainging hair is important because we need to have untangled clean and tidy hair
we needto get a hair cut too because our hair cold get messy exept you whant long hair.💇🏻‍♀️
thank you ^✓^
강사 첨삭
Great work, Yu Ri! You have a nice hair so take good care of it! See you on Wednesday!-Faith-
two times >> I do it two times.
the first one is to look at my hair and arainge it 1 time before going school .
>> The first one is to look at my hair and arrange it one time before going school.
then arrainge my hair one time before I go to bed.
then arrainge my hair one time before I go to bed.
>> Then, arrange my hair again before I go to bed.
I think arrainging hair is important because we need to have untangled clean and tidy hair
I think arrainging hair is important because we need to have untangled clean and tidy hair
>> I think arranging hair is important because we need to have an untangled, clean and tidy hair.
we needto get a hair cut too because our hair cold get messy exept you whant long hair.💇🏻‍♀️
>> We need to get a hair cut too because our hair could get messy except if you want a long hair.
thank you ^✓^
we needto get a hair cut too because our hair cold get messy exept you whant long hair.💇🏻‍♀️
>> We need to get a hair cut too because our hair could get messy except if you want a long hair.
thank you ^✓^
>> Thank you!
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