Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework^^
when my little sister was six she made a doll olympics competition.
first , I remember her doing skating competitions.⛸
the winner was her teddy🧸!
ten she made a swimming competition.
she told me that i was the winner^^
after that all the competitions winner was her.♛
thank you. ( ^♡^)⎛₍
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yu Ri! I believe that your sister is imaginative! I am happy that you are there to support her! Just love each other!-Faith-
Homework^^>> CORRECT
when my little sister was six she made a doll olympics competition.
when my little sister was six she made a doll olympics competition.
>> When my little sister was six, she made a doll for the Olympics competition, just for fun.
first , I remember her doing skating competitions.⛸
first , I remember her doing skating competitions.⛸
>> First, I remember her skating competitions.
the winner was her teddy🧸!
the winner was her teddy🧸!
>> The winner was her teddy bear!
ten she made a swimming competition.
ten she made a swimming competition.
>> Then, she made dolls for a swimming competition.
she told me that i was the winner^^
she told me that i was the winner^^
>> She told me that I was the winner^^
after that all the competitions winner was her.♛
after that all the competitions winner was her.♛
>> After that, the overall winner was her.
thank you. ( ^♡^)
thank you. ( ^♡^)
>> Thank you. ( ^♡^)
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