Homework😀
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite book is cats feelings dictionary because I like cats and all about cats are fun and new.
I learnd many things about cats in this book.
I want to write a book about cats or have a cat when I am more responsible.
learning about new creatures are fun ispecialy books that I like .
cats are nice animals that play or could be friends with children and adults.
thank you~
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yuri!
Wow! That is really fun and interesting. You seem to really like cats. I hope you can have a very cute cat soon.
Thank you for sharing~ ^^
~T. Roanne ^_^
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My favorite book is cats feelings dictionary because I like cats and all about cats are fun and new.
>> My favorite book is cat\'s feelings dictionary because I like cats and all about cats are fun and new.
I learnd many things about cats in this book.
I learnd many things about cats in this book.
>> I learned many things about cats in this book
I want to write a book about cats or have a cat when I am more responsible.
I want to write a book about cats or have a cat when I am more responsible.
>> Correct!
learning about new creatures are fun ispecialy books that I like .
learning about new creatures are fun ispecialy books that I like .
>> Learning about new creatures is fun, especially from books that I like.
cats are nice animals that play or could be friends with children and adults.
cats are nice animals that play or could be friends with children and adults.
>> Cats are nice animals that play or could be friends with children and adults.
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