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I have negative thoughts first.
Time doesn\'t wait for me.
I think age is in the past for me.
Because I think age is something that you can only have after the past.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]! ^_^)
Age is only a number that represents how long someone has been alive. This list of figures doesn\'t adequately convey who you are, what you have accomplished, or what you are still capable of. At any age, whether old or young, one can accomplish anything.
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I have negative thoughts first.
>>> I had negative thoughts at first.
Time doesn\'t wait for me.
Time doesn\'t wait for me.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I cannot stall time.
I think age is in the past for me.
I think age is in the past for me.
>>> I think aging is in the past for me.
Because I think age is something that you can only have after the past.
Because I think age is something that you can only have after the past.
>>> It\'s because I think age is something that you can only have after the past.
>>> OR: It\'s because, in my opinion, age is a quality that comes only with experience.
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