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What positive and negative things run within your family?
>>> The positive thing in my family is supporting each others, when someone have a problem. The negative thing in my family is that we are so busy, so we come back home late and meet together at night.
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The positive thing in my family is supporting each others, when someone have a problem.
>>> The positive thing in my family is supporting each other when someone has a problem.
The negative thing in my family is that we are so busy, so we come back home late and meet together at night.
>>> CORRECT!
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