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2023-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Most people are nervous before starting a meeting. An ice-breaker is necessary to increase the effectiveness of a meeting. For example, at the beginning of an interview with an employee, they ask simple questions that are not related to work to relieve tension.

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Most people are nervous before starting a meeting. 
>>> CORRECT!

An ice-breaker is necessary to increase the effectiveness of a meeting.
>>> CORRECT!

For example, at the beginning of an interview with an employee, they ask simple questions that are not related to work to relieve 
tension.
>>> CORRECT!

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