Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Because she worked very hard, her health broke down.
2. He came so, I went earlier.
3. John has not done his homework and neither has James.
4. How can I ask him for his help? we are not even on speaking terms.
-> Do we need to use conjunction? Even so, I don\'t know which one I have to use..;;
5. Walk carefully or you may fall.
As I told you before about one man protester who does it for several years in front of our building. He normally stands in front of main gate of our building which locates a little bit far from our building in order to protest. But since a several days ago, he entered the main gate and he stands with his tops off at in front of our front door. What\'s worse is that the siren sound is bigger, because he went through the main gate and he stands nearer to our office. But there is no way for us to stop him, because he just does it to the extent permitted by law. It\'s so annoying. I hope other people who live near our office report him to the police.
Good day!
강사 첨삭
Hello KC!!
A student who tries their very best is the optimal type of student. I actively see this personality trait in you. This is precisely what I like to see in students, and I know you\'re committed to improvement and growth.
T. Jeny
>>She worked so hard that her health broke down.
2. He came so, I went earlier.
2. He came so, I went earlier.
>>He came after I had gone.
3. John has not done his homework and neither has James.
3. John has not done his homework and neither has James.
>>Neither John nor James has done their homework.
4. How can I ask him for his help? we are not even on speaking terms.
4. How can I ask him for his help? we are not even on speaking terms.
>>I cannot ask him for his help because we are not even on speaking terms.
-> Do we need to use conjunction?
-> Do we need to use conjunction?
>>correct
Even so, I don\'t know which one I have to use..;;
>>correct
5. Walk carefully or you may fall.
>>Walk carefully lest you should fall.
5. Walk carefully or you may fall.
>>Walk carefully lest you should fall.
As I told you before about one man protester who does it for several years in front of our building.
>>correct
He normally stands in front of main gate of our building which locates a little bit far from our building in order to protest.
>>He normally stands in front of the main gate of our building, which locates a little bit far from our building, in order to protest.
But since a several days ago, he entered the main gate and he stands with his tops off at in front of our front door.
>>But several days ago, he entered the main gate and he stands with his tops off in front of our front door.
What\'s worse is that the siren sound is bigger, because he went through the main gate and he stands nearer to our office.
>>correct
But there is no way for us to stop him, because he just does it to the extent permitted by law. It\'s so annoying.
>>correct
I hope other people who live near our office report him to the police.
>>correct
Good day!
Good day!
>>correct
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