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I saw drama summarie at yesterday in youtube.
That title is \'이브\' about revenge.
There are a lot of vicious people in the drama
The heroine in it is pretty, but she has become spiteful for revenge.
It\'s the most shocking drama I\'ve seen recently.
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Good afternoon, [이름] [이름]! ^-^
I\'ve seen Eve and I also enjoyed the series. I felt bad for the female lead because she lost everything in just one night, her mom, dad and their company.
Still, taking revenge is not advisable. As a result of its deceit, revenge is useless. You may believe it to be in your favor, but it actually isn\'t. Retaliatory or vindictive behavior only serves to magnify unfavorable events.
I will see you later in class. Have a good day!
__T. Mayleen :)
I saw drama summarie at yesterday in youtube.
>>> I saw a drama summary yesterday on YouTube.
That title is \'이브\' about revenge.
That title is \'이브\' about revenge.
>>> The title is Eve, and it\'s about revenge.
There are a lot of vicious people in the drama
There are a lot of vicious people in the drama
>>> There are a lot of vicious characters in the drama.
The heroine in it is pretty, but she has become spiteful for revenge.
The heroine in it is pretty, but she has become spiteful for revenge.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Its protagonist is attractive, but she has turned bitter in an effort to get even.
It\'s the most shocking drama I\'ve seen recently.
It\'s the most shocking drama I\'ve seen recently.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: The most shocking drama I\'ve recently seen is this one.
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