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What do you have on your bucket list?
>>> One of my bucket list is touring Europe, especially Spain. I heard that Barcelona is really beautiful, and I want to watch a soccer game in Camp nou which is one of the biggest soccer stadium in the world.
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Happy Friday, Steve!
I truly admire your effort in expressing yourself in a written way. I hope that your passion will always be on fire for it leads you to better English expressions even if you notice that I am regularly giving some corrections on your sentences. Keep up the good work.
By the way, I hope that in the future, you\'ll be able to fulfill this bucket list!
Enjoy the day and the coming weekend!
Aki~
One of my bucket lists is touring Europe, especially Spain.
>>> CORRECT
I heard that Barcelona is really beautiful, and I want to watch a soccer game at Camp Nou which is one of the biggest soccer stadium in the world.
>>> CORRECT
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