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The safest means of transportation I think is by plane.
The reason is that the accident rate is the lowest when statistics are checked.
Most people are over-cautious about dangerous things, and I think airplanes belong to this is the case.
Cars have 370 times more deaths in accidents than airplanes, but the news still shows drunk driving-related accidents.
The use of cars has become such a natural society that people tend to become more insecure.
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Roadway design, traffic enforcement, road user behavior, and emergency response time are just a few of the factors that affect how safe transportation is. Therefore, a multidisciplinary strategy is necessary for successful transportation safety.
For a number of reasons, airplanes are safer than automobiles. One is that there is a significantly higher concentration of vehicles on most highways and roads, which increases the likelihood of crashes and accidents because so many vehicles are traveling so closely together.
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The safest means of transportation I think is by plane.
>>> The safest means of transportation, I think, is by plane.
The reason is that the accident rate is the lowest when statistics are checked.
The reason is that the accident rate is the lowest when statistics are checked.
>>> CORRECT
Most people are over-cautious about dangerous things, and I think airplanes belong to this is the case.
Most people are over-cautious about dangerous things, and I think airplanes belong to this is the case.
>>> Most people are overly cautious about dangerous things, and I think airplanes fall into this category.
Cars have 370 times more deaths in accidents than airplanes, but the news still shows drunk driving-related accidents.
Cars have 370 times more deaths in accidents than airplanes, but the news still shows drunk driving-related accidents.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Although there are 370 times more fatal accidents in cars than in airplanes, drunk driving incidents continue to be reported in the news.
The use of cars has become such a natural society that people tend to become more insecure.
The use of cars has become such a natural society that people tend to become more insecure.
>>> The use of cars has become such a natural part of society that people tend to become more insecure.
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