homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I was in Canberra last spring.
2) We were at school last Saturday.
3) Tina was at home yesterday.
4) He was happy.
5) Robert and Stan were Garry's friends.
Teacher Cam~
Hi~ Happy Tuesday~
A weekend is getting closer.^^
I apologize in advance.
Am I get the phone late?
My friends told sometimes I got the phone late.
On ringing, I usually answer my phone.
It was sometimes rung late.
My phone is strange.
My smartphone is not smart.
It was operated slowly.
I click my phone keypad, it is not operated at once.
I'm getting angry and I click it again and again, my phone is shot down or turned off.
Sometimes it is mute. It doesn't sound.
It makes me hot-tempered.
Although I get the phone late, I will not be busy.
When you call me, I will be preparing our class.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], what a wonderful Wednesday!
Thank you so much for making your composition once again,,I commend you for a job well done..
Thank you as well for preparing for our class Miss. [Name]..
Anyway, I think, your phone contains a lot of file taht\'s why it\'s not functioning well...kkkk
talk to you again alter my dear
Teacher Cam^^
1) I was in Canberra last spring. >>correct2) We were at school last Saturday. >>correct3) Tina was at home yesterday. >>correct4) He was happy. >>correct5) Robert and Stan were Garry\'s friends.>>correctTeacher Cam~
>>correctHi~ Happy Tuesday~
>>correctA weekend is getting closer.^^
>>correct
>>Weekend is just around the corner.I apologize in advance.
>>correctAm I get the phone late?
>>Do I answer your call late?My friends told sometimes I got the phone late.
>>My friends told me I answer the call late sometimes.On ringing, I usually answer my phone.
>>I usually answer my phone while ringing.It was sometimes rung late.
>>Sometimes my phon\'es ring is delayed.My phone is strange.
>>correctMy smartphone is not smart.
>>correctIt was operated slowly.
>>correctI click my phone keypad, it is not operated at once.
>>correctI\'m getting angry and I click it again and again, my phone is shot down or turned off.
>>When I get mad, I click my phone repeatedly and it will shut down or tunr off.Sometimes it is mute. It doesn\'t sound.
>>Sometimes it\'s mute, It won\'t make any sound.It makes me hot-tempered.
>>correctAlthough I get the phone late, I will not be busy.
>>Although I answer the phone, I won\'t be busy.When you call me, I will be preparing our class.
>>When you call me, I always prepare for our class.
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