Homework
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Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why?
>>>> I think aging is more difficult for men who use their power for working. As we get older, our power get weaker, so it is a disadvantage to men using their power.
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Great day, Steve!
Sadly in the Philippines, A lot of men die early than women maybe your answer could be one of the factors. They have been using their energy for working every day. I guess hard working people always deserve a treat ^^
Have a good day! Thank you for your homework:)
T. AKi~
I think aging is more difficult for men who use their power for working. As we get older, our power get weaker, so it is a disadvantage to men using their power.
>>> CORRECT!
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