homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you feel about others’ suggestions on how you live your life?
I like to get a suggestion on my life because others intention of suggestions is that they desire to improve my life.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Dan!
Thank you for completing your homework! :D
I agree with you that receiving suggestions from outside perspectives can be very beneficial, especially if we follow the suggestions humbly.
Anyway, See you on Friday!-T.Jhozel
How do you feel about others’ suggestions on how you live your life?
I like to get a suggestion on my life because others intention of suggestions is that they desire to improve my life.
>> I enjoy receiving suggestions about my life because the suggestions are intended to improve my life.
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