Homework
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Of course, I think there should be strict rules.
As you can see in various news and movies, most of the money is invested by other people and it has to be returned in the end, so illegal things naturally happen.
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Of course, I think there should be strict rules.
>>> CORRECT!
As you can see in various news and movies, most of the money is invested by other people and it has to be returned in the end, so illegal things naturally happen.
>>> CORRECT!
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