Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The trip to Jindo was so fun and exciting.
I was really looking forward to the mysterious sea road,
but it was a pity that the water did not drain completely.
Still, I picked up seaweed and caught clams.
And my family wore fishermen\'s clothes and boots,
so people looked at them strangely and were interested in talking to them.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Eliana!
Thank you for showing me pictures of your trip to Jindo! I am so happy for your children to have this kind of experience.
For this homework, you created great sentences.
keep up the good work!
Aki~
The trip to Jindo was so fun and exciting.
>>> CORRECT!
I was really looking forward to the mysterious sea road, but it was a pity that the water did not drain completely.
>>> CORRECT!
Still, I picked up seaweed and caught clams.
>>> CORRECT!
And my family wore fishermen\'s clothes and boots, so people looked at them strangely and were interested in talking to them.
>>> CORRECT!
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