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Every time is always different but generally i runing out together with last year classmates
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Hi Henry,
School break times offer a vital opportunity for children to interact with peers and develop social skills. And recess is beneficial to students because it increases their level of physical activity, improves their memory, attention, and concentration, and helps them stay on-task in the classroom. Teacher QUENNY^^
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Every time is always different but generally i runing out together with last year classmates
>> I do different activities every time we have break time in school. Generally, I sometimes run with my friends and classmates during break time.
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Every time is always different but generally i runing out together with last year classmates
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