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It is recommended to travel to Yeosu. There is also the sea, and as a tourist city, there are many accommodation facilities. And you can also ride the cable car.
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Hello Eliana!
I checked Yeosu and there are many things to do there. It is really a very good place to visit. Thanks for this information, I may not have a chance to go to Korea but I have something to read about.
Have a great day!
Aki~
It is recommended to travel to Yeosu.
>>> CORRECT!
There is also the sea, and as a tourist city, there are many accommodation facilities.
>>> CORRECT!
And you can also ride the cable car
>>> CORRECT!
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