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I want to learn musical. These days, I feel frustrated because I am not faithful to my feelings and cannot express them. While learning the musical, I want to express my emotions, sing songs, and shake off bad feelings.
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I want to learn musical.
>>> I want to learn music.
>>> OR: I want to try performing in a musical.
These days, I feel frustrated because I am not faithful to my feelings and cannot express them.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I get frustrated because I can\'t communicate my feelings and don\'t stay true to them these days.
While learning the musical, I want to express my emotions, sing songs, and shake off bad feelings.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I want to express my feelings, sing songs, and get rid of unwanted sensations as I learn the musical.
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