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I think the most difficult hobby is the one that costs a lot of money. So my husband always hopes that what he likes can be a livelihood or a side job.
I didn\'t agree with it before, but now I agree with it.
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Hello Eliana!
Thank you for this! I totally agree with you. I am sorry to say this, but I don\'t understand some people who spend a lot of money just to continue doing their hobbies Well, it\'s a matter of decision.
enjoy the rest of your day!
Aki~
I think the most difficult hobby is the one that costs a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!
So my husband always hopes that what he likes can be a livelihood or a side job.
>>> CORRECT!
I didn\'t agree with it before, but now I agree with it.
>>> CORRECT!
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