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I want to recommend you sleep a little time during afternoon. It will help you keeping focus on something you have to finish.I think sleep makes working more efficient.
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Good morning, Dan!
Great job! Thank you for writing a long sentence this time! Well done!
Enjoy your weekend! See you next week~-T.Jhozel
I want to recommend you sleep a little time during afternoon.
>> I recommend that you take a short nap in the afternoon.
It will help you keeping focus on something you have to finish.
>> It will help you stay focused on something you need to finish.
I think sleep makes working more efficient.
>> I believe that sleeping improves productivity.
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