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My school is nice but there is something problematic about atmosphere of studying
It makes other students hang out easily not a study
So i think that’s our school’s problem
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Hi Henry,
The school provides an environment where we can learn a lot of basic skills. And school is the foremost fountain of knowledge children are exposed to. It gives a chance for them to acquire knowledge in various fields of education. ~ Teacher QUENNY^^
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My school is nice but there is something problematic about atmosphere of studying
>> My school is nice but there is something problematic about the atmosphere of studying.
It makes other students hang out easily not a study
>> It makes other students hang out easily and not study.
So i think that’s our school’s problem
>> So I think that’s the problem in our school.
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My school is nice but there is something problematic about atmosphere of studying
It makes other students hang out easily not a study
So i think that’s our school’s problem
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