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It\'s hard to have a lot of time for hobbies. While I pick up the children\'s academies and wait, I make doll clothes or draw pictures at the cafe for my hobbies. My wish is to have a leisurely hobby time during the long hours when my husband and children go to work and school. And it is to have a meeting with friends who have the same hobbies as me.
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Hi there, Eliana!
Wow, your passion for your hobby is incredible. So I think when it comes to hobbies, one must have a hobby that does not require space, money and a lot of time, Like you], you can do your hobby anytime :)
Have a great day.
Aki~
It\'s hard to have a lot of time for hobbies.
>>> CORRECT!
While I pick up the children\'s academies and wait, I make doll clothes or draw pictures at the cafe for my hobbies.
>>> CORRECT!
My wish is to have a leisurely hobby time during the long hours when my husband and children go to work and school.
>>> CORRECT!
And it is to have a meeting with friends who have the same hobbies as me.
>>> CORRECT!
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