Homework
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At your age, what are the goals that you have set for your life?
>>> At my age, it is the most important goal to get a job which can use my professional skills. If we get a job, we can earn money, and then we can do more things, like traveling, shopping, etc.
강사 첨삭
Hello Steve!
Stay focused, go after your dreams, and keep moving toward your goals. Everyone has their own goals, which vary on time frame.
Thank you for writing your homework.
T. Aki~
At my age, it is the most important goal to get a job which can use my professional skills.
>>> At my age, it is the most important goal to get a job that can use my professional skills.
If we get a job, we can earn money, and then we can do more things, like traveling, shopping, etc.
>>> CORRECT!
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