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I met my buddy when I was in my 20s and lived in Seoul for 5 years.
She has a lively and confident personality, and she likes to drink with her similar personality, so it was a big help for her to live in a foreign country, which was difficult to meet often.
They are precious friends whom they met as adults, sharing their joys and sorrows with each other.
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Great day, Elina!
Thank you for writing this. Please be mindful of my suggestion since that is a long sentence.
Have an awesome day!
Aki~
I met my buddy when I was in my 20s and lived in Seoul for 5 years.
>>> CORRECT!
She has a lively and confident personality, and she likes to drink with her similar personality, so it was a big help for her to live in a foreign country,
>>> She has a lively and confident personality ad she likes to drink just like me, so it was a big help for us to live in a different city.
which was difficult to meet often.
>>> CORRECT!
They are precious friends whom they met as adults, sharing their joys and sorrows with each other.
>>> CORRECT!
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