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학생이 쓴 원문
Some of my friends live in China and New York, and others live in Seoul and Gangwon-do.
Most of my friends who are far away contact me through KakaoTalk, a Korean messenger.
And I share my daily life on Instagram.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Eliana!
Technology has brought people together. This is one of the best things that technology has done, and to be honest, it should build a relationship not destroy one. I hope you\'ll get a chance to catch up with your friends. Enjoy the rest of your day!
Aki~
Some of my friends live in China and New York, and others live in Seoul and Gangwon-do.
>>> CORRECT!
Most of my friends who are far away contact me through KakaoTalk, a Korean messenger.
>>> CORRECT!
And I share my daily life on Instagram.
>>> CORRECT!
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