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2023-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

\"The price of greatness is responsibility.\" It sounds like \"A great man is a person who has a sense of responsibility\" or \"A man can be a great man only when he has a sense of responsibility\". Anyway, It means that responsibility is one of the best virtues to be a good or great man. I don\'t like those kind of people who don\'t try to keep their wolds. Of course, people can\'t keep their words sometimes. But we do our best to keep it anyway. I am so sorry for our today\'s conversation(I was mumbling and I couldn\'t answer properly anyway). My condition wasn\'t good this morning as I couldn\'t sleep well because of the chest pain. It was worse then yesterday. I skipped my Spanish class yesterday to take a rest. I think I need to go to the hospital tomorrow. I already had an appointment with a dentist tomorrow which means that I already applied to take a half day off tomorrow. So, before I go to the dentist, I will go to the hospital to find out the cause of my pain. Have a great day!

강사 첨삭

Nice homework, KC!!


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T. Jeny


\"The price of greatness is responsibility.\"
>>correct
It sounds like \"A great man is a person who has a sense of responsibility\" or \"A man can be a great man only when he has a sense of responsibility.\"
>>correct
Anyway, It means that responsibility is one of the best virtues to be a good or great man.
>>correct
I don\'t like those kind of people who don\'t try to keep their wolds.
>>I don\'t like those kinds of people who don\'t try to keep their word.
 Of course, people can\'t keep their words sometimes.
>>Of course, people can\'t keep their word sometimes.
 But we do our best to keep it anyway.
>>correct
I am so sorry for our today\'s conversation(I was mumbling and I couldn\'t answer properly anyway). 
>>correct
My condition wasn\'t good this morning as I couldn\'t sleep well because of the chest pain. It was worse then yesterday. 
>>My condition wasn\'t good this morning as I couldn\'t sleep well because of the chest pain. It was worse than yesterday. 
I skipped my Spanish class yesterday to take a rest. 
>>correct
I think I need to go to the hospital tomorrow. 
>>correct
I already had an appointment with a dentist tomorrow, which means that I already applied to take a half day off tomorrow. 
>>I already have an appointment with a dentist tomorrow, which means that I have already applied to take a half day off tomorrow. 
So, before I go to the dentist, I will go to the hospital to find out the cause of my pain.
>>correct
Have a great day!
>>correct

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