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Which do you prefer? Buying things for yourself or for other people?
Give a gift to others makes me happy but I like buying something after finishing my test. It reduces my stress which came from test.
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Which do you prefer? Buying things for yourself or for other people?
Give a gift to others makes me happy but I like buying something after finishing my test.
>> Giving gifts to others makes me happy, but I prefer to buy something after I finish my test.
It reduces my stress which came from test.
>> It relieves the stress caused by the test.
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