Homework
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I like my neighborhood because it is quiet and there are many places to take a walk. The air is good because it\'s in the countryside. It is convenient because there are three other convenience stores nearby.
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Good afternoon, [이름] [이름]! ^-^
Happy Monday! Thank you for finding time to answer your homework.
Living in the country is ideal if you want a place that is cleaner, quieter, and safer.
I will see you later in class. Enjoy the rest of your day!
__T. Mayleen :)
I like my neighborhood because it is quiet and there are many places to take a walk.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: My neighborhood is peaceful, and there are many of places to go for walks.
The air is good because it\'s in the countryside.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: It\'s in the countryside, so the air is clean.
It is convenient because there are three other convenience stores nearby.
>>> It is accessible because there are three convenience stores nearby.
>>> OR: Three convenience stores are close by, thus it is easily accessible.
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