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My favorite place to exercise is the living room at home.
It\'s because I have to exercise in my spare time while doing housework.
To be honest, I want to go to the Zumba Center and exercise leisurely while looking at the wide space and full-length mirror.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Eliana!
Thank you for haring this and I totally agree with your last sentence that it would be nice to do an exercise at a wide pace where you can see yourself in a full-length mirror. Keep practicing :)
Aki~
My favorite place to exercise is the living room at home.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s because I have to exercise in my spare time while doing housework.
>>> CORRECT!
To be honest, I want to go to the Zumba Center and exercise leisurely while looking at the wide space and full-length mirror.
>>> CORRECT!
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