Homework
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Q: Are there any cultural or societal factors that contribute to loneliness and isolation? Why?
A: I think some cultural or societal factors that contribute to loneliness and isolation is group of people.
I think group of people makes some people to be lonely, and be out of the group.
I think another factor is the SNS because they make people to be in their house.
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A: I think some cultural or societal factors that contribute to loneliness and isolation is group of people. I think group of people makes some people to be lonely, and be out of the group. I think another factor is the SNS because they make people to be in their house.
>> I think some cultural or societal factors that contribute to loneliness and isolation are a group of people. I think the group of people makes someone lonely and out of the group. Another factor is the SNS because they make people be in their houses.
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